Monday 31 January 2011

English language essay question

How has the language of the text been influenced by technology?

         The language in the texts has been influenced by technology in many different ways, for example, abbreviations have been used; ‘wed’ ‘Tb lv n.’ People use to have to pay for the length of each text, therefore the shorter the text the cheaper it was, consequently people started abbreviating words and missing out vowels. This method of ‘texting’ is still used because it makes it quicker to type out messages, and therefore a group of people can exchange in text messages within seconds, holding conversations fluently without long gaps waiting for replies. This also links to the number, ‘2moz’ and letter homophones used; ‘r u?’ These make it possible to shorten whole words into just a few letters and numbers; are you = r u and 2moz = tomorrow. Consequently resulting in speedier texting.
          Text messages are normally between two people that know each other and are therefore a private matter, however more and more companies, ie banks, are starting to use them as a way of getting information out to their customers. The examples given show a private set of text messages, showing a conversation between some friends. Therefore the messages are all informal, you can tell this due to the use of non-standard English, spelling and grammar, ‘havnt.’ This shows an example of the use of elision without the use of apostrophise, this makes it’s quicker and easier to text without using standard grammar, and also because the majority of people text people whom they know, and therefore text in a conversational tone, just like they would if they were talking in person. As well as this, it also shows how culture has had an effect on text messaging because it has become thought to be ‘cool’ to ‘text’ using a certain style, such as phonetic spelling and non-standard English.
            There is also the use of punctuation to imitate suprasegmental features, ‘xxx’ = kisses. This adds recognition to the reader of the text, as to what context it is meant in. For example ‘x’ on the end of a text shows friendliness. This is influenced by technology because it’s hard to show tone on voice over writing and therefore people add things like this to help add tone to their messages. This is very similar to the use of emoticons in the text; ‘:).’ This shows how ‘texting’ has been adapted to show the emotion that the text is meant to be read with. For example a text with ‘:)’ in it, is said in a happy way, ect. This is also because this ‘tone’ doesn’t come across in text due to the lack of facial expressions from the two people holding the conversation. Therefore you only get the words of the conversation, but you can’t hear the tone of which they were said in or facial expressions, therefore emoticons and punctuation to imitate suprasegmental features helps to show these in the text.
          There has also been the use of youth socialect within some of the texts; ‘wanna.’ and ‘I’m like on already.’ This adds to the informal feel of the texts, allowing each individual to express their own ‘tone’ to a message. ‘Chil @ mine” shows an example of how words can be shortened, making texts shorter and quicker; one of the ‘l’s’ on ‘chill’ has been removed, but still leaves the word recognisable. As well as with, punctuation has been used to replace words such as ‘@’ instead of the word ‘at’. This makes texting quicker amd shorter, therefore saving on time and money.
           All in all, the language in the texts has been influenced by technology in many ways, but the main influence has been that people abbreviate words, trying to write as much as possible in as little time and letters possible. This is because it use to be that the longer the text the more it would cost to send, and the quicker you send a text, the quicker you get a reply, which then keeps up the ‘face to face’ feel to the conversation. The other main influence has been the use of emoticons, these are used to reflect the emotions and face expressions of the ‘texter’ to make up for the fact the conversation isn’t happening face to face.

Friday 26 November 2010

Photography

I edited this photo, making it black and white, to add mystery to the photo, and then adding lyrics from a song to add emotion.

For this photo, I used a tripod so that the camera stayed still to reduce shake on the image. This also allowed me to be in the photo aswell as my model.

I like the contrast of the two hair colours on this photo, as it adds impact on the viewer.

I decided I wanted to do fashion photo's, basing my photography on a magazine aimed at young adults. I think I achieved this because the photo shows two girls in this age range, doing poses that are typical of fashion magazines.

As I modelled in this photo myself, it meant that I couldn't take the photo as well. Therefore, I had to teach someone else how to use the camera (a cannon digital SLR) and guide them as to how to capture the image.


I like this photo because of the low key lighting. I think this adds a mysterious effect on the photo.




I instructed someone else how to take this photo. I wanted the 'LOVE' to be in focus in the foreground, whereas I wanted myself to be in the background.

I like this photo because I think it looks quite quirky. However to improve it I could have tried to get my models eye in the centre of the 'O' 




I tried to imatate a fashion photo here, by having the 'Love' on the forground. I hoped this would draw attention to the photo, also by having the 'Love' in high key lighting but the background and model in low key lighting, I hoped this would create an interessting photo.

I got the idea for this photo from one of the photos used on the 'Xfactor'. I liked the pose used because I think it looks different and quirkey. Also it draws attention to the eye and makes that the focus of the photo.






Tuesday 23 November 2010

Media - Teenage dramas, coursework research

Teenage Dramas


Skins

Creators of the programme: Jamie Brittain, Bryan Elsley and Mike Bailey
Audience: certificate rating, 18+ - boys and girls
Ratings: 833,000 viewers
Production Company: Company Pictures, E4, Stormdog Films
Run time: 60 minutes (including adverts) 
Number of episodes: 9 in a series
Aired on: E4


Inbetweeners

Written by: Damon Beesley and Iain Morris,
Audience: teenagers, 18 – 24, mainly male (but also attracts females)
Ratings: 2.247 million viewers
Production Company: Bwark Productions, Young Films
Run time: 25 minutes
Number of episodes: 12 in a series
Aired on: E4
Release date: 1st May 2008

The O.C.

Creator: Josh Schwartz
Release Date: 7 March 2004
Audience: Teenagers
Originally aired on: Fox network
Ratings: 9.7 million viewers
Run time: 44 minutes

Envision

Envision – Helping the homeless

Homelessness

. Web definition of homelessness: is the condition of people and social category of people who don't have a regular house or dwelling because they cannot afford, pay for, or are otherwise unable to maintain regular, safe, and adequate housing

. Homelessness can affect people in many different ways: Ill health, mental stress, social deprivation and isolation, the ability to find schools and education for children can be made harder, the ability to find jobs can be made harder, and confidence can plummet

.Causes: Loss of job, house repossession, family problems (split parents), natural disasters (flooding), run always (most common in teenagers)


What we aim to do

. We would like to run a work shop with the year 7’s on an ‘Enhance Curriculum Day.’
During this work shop we will raise the awareness of homelessness, hopefully get rid of any questions, misunderstandings and prejudice towards homeless people.

. Run a cake stall at our local town market.
We will work with our school's ‘cookery club’ to produce a range of tasty snacks such as cakes and buns, and then sell these on a stall at the market, we will then give any profits raised to a homeless charity.

.Volunteer with the local charity ‘Canopy’
Canopy volunteers work as a team to renovate an empty and derelict house that have been standing empty for years, and transforms them into homes

Saturday 6 November 2010

English Literature essay - Thomas Hardy poems

Thomas Hardy’s methods in ‘Under the Waterfall’



          Hardy uses many techniques in ‘Under the waterfall’, the most obvious one being the idea of symbolism. For example the whole poem revolves around a waterfall, which in its self is a symbol of love and beauty. He then carries the method of representing his feelings, towards this memory of a past lover, by using other symbolic ideas. Such as ‘And why does plunging your arm in a bowl full of spring water, bring throbs to your soul?’ This suggests a feeling of heartbreak to the reader; also spring water is a very pure source of water, which could link to the idea of his memory to be about ‘pure love.’ He then goes on to talk about how he and his lover drank from the same glass; I think the glass represents love. We then get told of how that glass gets dropped into the pool of water, ‘where it slipped, and sank, and was past recall.’ This could symbol the fact that his relationship with his lover had deteriorated until it was past salvation. ‘There the glass still is’ could also mean one of two things, either: the glass is still there and will last forever, unlike love, which is turning his cherished memory into the harsh reality. Or that somewhere, deep down, that love still exists between him and his lover, but it is no longer on show or used. The symbolism between the glass and his love is continued in the last stanza when he says; ‘There lies intact that chalice of ours’ The fact that Hardy chose to use the word ‘chalice’ here instead of ‘glass’, like he has else where in the poem, shows that there is more to that glass that what the reader may think. A chalice is a religious, special goblet used for drinking, so linking back to the symbolism; this could be suggesting that there was more to his love that what first seemed, and that the love that he once shared was something sacred. Also ‘there lies intact’ reinforces the idea that, deep down, there are still feelings towards this lover.
                   Another method Hardy uses is the fact the poem is written from somebody else’s view and memory, we assume this person is his wife or one of his past lovers. The whole of the poem is written in speech marks, showing the reader that it isn’t Hardy himself speaking, but actually somebody else.
                  Hardy also has a structure to his poem, having rhyming couplets throughout ‘Under the waterfall’. This makes the poem flow when it is being read, and even though it isn’t a sonnet, it gives it the same fixed rhyme scheme that can be found in many sonnets. Lines 5-8 and 25-28 are also indented, which gives the poem the shape of a waterfall, which fits is nicely with the theme of the poem.
            Imagery is also often used throughout the poem: ‘And has spoken since hills were turfless peaks’ ‘smoothness opalized’ ‘Of blue with a leaf-wove awning of green, in the burn of August to paint the scene.’  This draws the reader into what is being said, and helps them to imagine the memory that is being spoken of. Also it shows the reader that it isn’t just a meaningless memory to the speaker, but it is in fact a vivid memory that obviously means so much, it is still remembered, right down to the fine detail.
           A number of writing techniques have also been used, such as oxymoron and personification. ‘The sweet sharp sense of a fugitive day.’ This is an oxymoron, and by having these two words together in this context suggests that it’s a memory that is still favoured by the speaker, but is also a spiteful memory. The word ‘fugitive’ meaning criminal, which could signify the two lovers were being rebellious by being together. This could then mean the speaker still gets thrills from remembering the excitement that was felt by breaking the rules to be with their lover. Also ‘With a hollow boiling voice it speaks.’ Is personification of the waterfall. This shows that the waterfall plays an important part in this memory and therefore has a lot of power and status, so much